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+ | <pre> | ||
+ | Gmail - Correction to Finnegans Web's Webified version of James Joyce's <i>Finnegans Wake</i> | ||
+ | tim szeliga <[email protected]> | ||
+ | |||
+ | 036.01: "ginger, which" should be "ginger which" | ||
+ | 334.31: HTML visible | ||
+ | 058.27: "(pardonnez!" should be "(pardonnez!)" | ||
+ | 019.32: "waste, and" should be "waste and" | ||
+ | 022.07: "'a forethought'" does not correspond to any of the texts I | ||
+ | have (Faber, Viking & Penguin each have a different text here - I prefer | ||
+ | Faber ("aforethought"), you seem to follow Viking in most of your text | ||
+ | ("a forethought")) | ||
+ | |||
+ | 059.32: "himself" should be followed by "." | ||
+ | 365.12: "dollymaukins" should be followed by "!" (Faber) or by "." | ||
+ | (Viking & Penguin) | ||
+ | 132.36: there should be a "," after "eilerdich" | ||
+ | 143.14: there is a spurious "." after "of" | ||
+ | 310.27: there is a spurious "." after "in" | ||
+ | 344.30: there is a spurious "." before "Clummensy" | ||
+ | 375.30: there is a spurious "." before "fancy" | ||
+ | 413.14: there should be a "." after "P.L.M" | ||
+ | 420.20: "A.D." should be in a smaller font | ||
+ | 552.16: there is a spurious "!" after "Welhell!" | ||
+ | 022.31: there is a spurious "-" after "of" | ||
+ | 271.L, last line: there should be a space between "crush" and "sake" | ||
+ | 272.F1: there should a comma after "that" | ||
+ | 290.26: "for'twas" should be "for 'twas" | ||
+ | 295.33: "Lucihere !" should be "Lucihere.!" | ||
+ | 307.F3: "Paris!" should be "Paris?" | ||
+ | 011.10-11: "in" should be in line .10 (not .11) | ||
+ | 013.22: "Dyffinarsky" should be "Dyfflinarsky" | ||
+ | 020.08-09: the "b" of "rubrickredd" should be in line .09 (not .08) | ||
+ | 093.04: "patch" should be "pitch" | ||
+ | 093.27: "Rasa" should be "Rosa" | ||
+ | 093.36: "tribes, loss" should be "tribes loss" | ||
+ | 122.34: "then)" should be "then);" | ||
+ | 130.34-35: "polt" should be in line .34 (not .35) | ||
+ | 130.35-36: the "high-" of "highbigpipey" should be in line .35 (not .36) | ||
+ | 133.08-09: the "s" of "Liebsterpet" should be in line .08 (not .09) | ||
+ | 136.36: "mountain" should be "moontaen" | ||
+ | 138.36: "gird" should be "girds" | ||
+ | 141.13: "hyelp hyelf" should be "hyelp hyelp" | ||
+ | 158.05: "I see" should be preceded by a dash | ||
+ | 162.12-13: "up" should be in line .12 (not .13) | ||
+ | 183.25: "ladies" should be "ladies'" | ||
+ | 224.04-05: "presence" should be in line .05 (not .04) | ||
+ | 224.05-06: "fould the" should be in line .06 (not .05) | ||
+ | 224.06-07: "gravy" should be in line .07 (not .06) | ||
+ | 229.13-14: "Luncher Out." should be in line .14 (not .13) | ||
+ | 229.14-15: "the Mer-" should be in line .15 (not .14) | ||
+ | 229.15-16: "Misery." should be in line .16 (not .15) | ||
+ | 248.32-33: "Blanche" should be in line .32 (not .33) | ||
+ | 248.33-34: "Awabeg" should be in line .33 (not .34) | ||
+ | 248.34-35: "cipher" should be in line .34 (not .35) | ||
+ | 248.35-36: "na" should be in line .35 (not .36) | ||
+ | 351.16: "allround" should be "all round" | ||
+ | 390.17: "Deaddleconchs" should be "Deaddleconche" | ||
+ | 427.22-23: "ousts of" should be in line .22 (not .23) | ||
+ | 427.23-24: "the pity," should be in line .23 (not .24) | ||
+ | 427.24-25: "for" should be in line .24 (not .25) | ||
+ | 438.28: "thereinunder" should be "therinunder" (& wholly in line .28) | ||
+ | 566.26: 2nd "porkego." should be "porkego!" | ||
+ | 594.18-19: the "pub" of "clubpubber" should be in line .19 (not .18) | ||
+ | 594.20-21: "of" should be in line .21 (not .20) | ||
+ | 600.01-02: "to" should be in line .02 (not .01) | ||
+ | 616.23: "oldfirm's" should be "old firm's" | ||
+ | |||
+ | 346.08-.10: missing italics &c. | ||
+ | 049.02: missing full stop before "His" | ||
+ | 074.06-.07: the word "and" belongs to line .06, not .07 | ||
+ | 086.11: "Thoor-" should be "Thoors-" | ||
+ | 082.22: "knobkerries," should be "knobkerries" | ||
+ | 093.09: "the latten" should be "turn the latten" | ||
+ | 094.22: "? ..........0!" should be a capital O, not a zero | ||
+ | 095.12: in "H2CE3" there should be spaces before and after the "C 110.01: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph | ||
+ | 126.10: the question number should be "1" (one), not "I" (capital I) | ||
+ | 159.09: the second "!" should not be italicised | ||
+ | 140.13: "word:" should be "world:" | ||
+ | 172.11: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph | ||
+ | 185.14: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph | ||
+ | 254.10: "lrenews" should be "Irenews" (uppercase I, not lowercase L) | ||
+ | 310.09: there should be a comma after "somehows" | ||
+ | 332.18: there should be a comma after "altolà" | ||
+ | 332.18: there should be a comma after the first "gué" | ||
+ | 332.18: there should be a full stop after ")" | ||
+ | 342.34: "Loudnin" should be "Loundin" | ||
+ | 352.10: "messgèr" should probably be "messger" (i.e. no accent on "e") | ||
+ | (I believe the Faber & Viking editions just have a smudge there, but I may be wrong) | ||
+ | 428.01: "Suasusopo!" should be "Suasusupo!" | ||
+ | 428.02: "Somoanesia" should be "Samoanesia" | ||
+ | 428.02: "be forgetting" should be "be after forgetting" | ||
+ | 428.03: "chalking" should be "chalkin" | ||
+ | 428.05: "in thoughts" should be "in your thoughts" | ||
+ | 428.05: "how deepings" should be "how the deepings" | ||
+ | 481.02: line should end with a "?", just like 481.03 | ||
+ | 481.03: "es" should be "as" | ||
+ | 481.35: "fué fué" should be "fué! fué!" | ||
+ | 508.27: there should be a comma after "shallshee" | ||
+ | 547: the entire page, starting from line .06, is formatted as a | ||
+ | "Penguin" page, not as a "Faber/Viking" one, whereas other pages | ||
+ | follow the latter | ||
+ | 576.01: there should be a comma after "scabie" | ||
+ | 269.L: the Greek is altogether wrong (visible HTML, aberrant line | ||
+ | break, missing alpha, missing diacritics (probably intentional)) | ||
+ | 599.13: "even;" should be "even" | ||
+ | 303.R: "AND WHISTLE." should occupy two lines, not one | ||
+ | 262.20: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph | ||
+ | 264.01: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph | ||
+ | 265.F3: "H'd" should be "H' d" (i.e. space before "d") | ||
+ | 266.20: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph | ||
+ | 266.L: "there's no no pug-" should be "there's no pug-" | ||
+ | 269.F2: the accent on "Renee" should be eacute not egrave | ||
+ | 277.F7: second line should not be indented | ||
+ | 281.04: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph | ||
+ | 281.05: "plaîit" should be "plaît" | ||
+ | 288.F5: "cinnamonhued" should be "cinnamondhued" | ||
+ | 308.R: "BEEFTAY'S" should be "BEEEFTAY'S" | ||
+ | 308.R: "POETICS" should be "POETIC" | ||
+ | |||
+ | These may well be the last corrigenda for now. Good luck with | ||
+ | updating | ||
+ | your site. | ||
+ | |||
+ | Finally, a favour. If someone sends you corrections in the future, I | ||
+ | would be grateful if you could remember to forward them to me too, | ||
+ | so that I can correct my copy as well. I will, of course, do the | ||
+ | same if corrections arrive through my site. | ||
+ | Ta, | ||
+ | Raphael (http://www.fweet.org/) | ||
</pre> | </pre> |
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There are many pages that badly need cleaning up or reformatting. Perhaps we should collect them here, so that anyone who has a spare minute can fix one.
Also a warning: dashes have been done with the markup <STRIKE> ; ; </STRIKE>, which shows up ; ; like this. It is best to replace these with the (correct) markup — which shows up — like this. But beware! Look carefully at the text in the neighbourhood of the STRIKE markup. There were several places where words were missing. Don't replace STRIKE markup without first checking the text against a printed copy.
Similar care needs to be taken if the italic markup <I> or other markup is visible on the formatted page: often it is a sign that the page was imported incorrectly and that the text needs to be checked.
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Page 260 to Page 308 badly broken; much work needed. Really these need to be re-imported. Trying to correct these pages by hand will potentially add too many errors. Reimported - Pemberton
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Corrections suggested by Raphael of fweet.org 011.10-11: "in" should be in line .10 (not .11) 013.22: "Dyffinarsky" should be "Dyfflinarsky" 020.08-09: the "b" of "rubrickredd" should be in line .09 (not .08) 093.04: "patch" should be "pitch" 093.27: "Rasa" should be "Rosa" 093.36: "tribes, loss" should be "tribes loss" 122.34: "then)" should be "then);" 130.34-35: "polt" should be in line .34 (not .35) 130.35-36: the "high-" of "highbigpipey" should be in line .35 (not .36) 133.08-09: the "s" of "Liebsterpet" should be in line .08 (not .09) 136.36: "mountain" should be "moontaen" 138.36: "gird" should be "girds" 141.13: "hyelp hyelf" should be "hyelp hyelp" 158.05: "I see" should be preceded by a dash 162.12-13: "up" should be in line .12 (not .13) 183.25: "ladies" should be "ladies'" 224.04-05: "presence" should be in line .05 (not .04) 224.05-06: "fould the" should be in line .06 (not .05) 224.06-07: "gravy" should be in line .07 (not .06) 229.13-14: "Luncher Out." should be in line .14 (not .13) 229.14-15: "the Mer-" should be in line .15 (not .14) 229.15-16: "Misery." should be in line .16 (not .15) 248.32-33: "Blanche" should be in line .32 (not .33) 248.33-34: "Awabeg" should be in line .33 (not .34) 248.34-35: "cipher" should be in line .34 (not .35) 248.35-36: "na" should be in line .35 (not .36) 351.16: "allround" should be "all round" 390.17: "Deaddleconchs" should be "Deaddleconche" 427.22-23: "ousts of" should be in line .22 (not .23) 427.23-24: "the pity," should be in line .23 (not .24) 427.24-25: "for" should be in line .24 (not .25) 438.28: "thereinunder" should be "therinunder" (& wholly in line .28) 566.26: 2nd "porkego." should be "porkego!" 594.18-19: the "pub" of "clubpubber" should be in line .19 (not .18) 594.20-21: "of" should be in line .21 (not .20) 600.01-02: "to" should be in line .02 (not .01) <STRIKE>616.23: "oldfirm's" should be "old firm's"</STRIKE> (based mainly on Joyce's "Corrections of Misprints" list (and nearby lines)) Dr. Theall's original copy scanned to create the ASCII had Joyce's corrections as a separate pamphlet.
Gmail - Correction to Finnegans Web's Webified version of James Joyce's <i>Finnegans Wake</i> tim szeliga <[email protected]> 036.01: "ginger, which" should be "ginger which" 334.31: HTML visible 058.27: "(pardonnez!" should be "(pardonnez!)" 019.32: "waste, and" should be "waste and" 022.07: "'a forethought'" does not correspond to any of the texts I have (Faber, Viking & Penguin each have a different text here - I prefer Faber ("aforethought"), you seem to follow Viking in most of your text ("a forethought")) 059.32: "himself" should be followed by "." 365.12: "dollymaukins" should be followed by "!" (Faber) or by "." (Viking & Penguin) 132.36: there should be a "," after "eilerdich" 143.14: there is a spurious "." after "of" 310.27: there is a spurious "." after "in" 344.30: there is a spurious "." before "Clummensy" 375.30: there is a spurious "." before "fancy" 413.14: there should be a "." after "P.L.M" 420.20: "A.D." should be in a smaller font 552.16: there is a spurious "!" after "Welhell!" 022.31: there is a spurious "-" after "of" 271.L, last line: there should be a space between "crush" and "sake" 272.F1: there should a comma after "that" 290.26: "for'twas" should be "for 'twas" 295.33: "Lucihere !" should be "Lucihere.!" 307.F3: "Paris!" should be "Paris?" 011.10-11: "in" should be in line .10 (not .11) 013.22: "Dyffinarsky" should be "Dyfflinarsky" 020.08-09: the "b" of "rubrickredd" should be in line .09 (not .08) 093.04: "patch" should be "pitch" 093.27: "Rasa" should be "Rosa" 093.36: "tribes, loss" should be "tribes loss" 122.34: "then)" should be "then);" 130.34-35: "polt" should be in line .34 (not .35) 130.35-36: the "high-" of "highbigpipey" should be in line .35 (not .36) 133.08-09: the "s" of "Liebsterpet" should be in line .08 (not .09) 136.36: "mountain" should be "moontaen" 138.36: "gird" should be "girds" 141.13: "hyelp hyelf" should be "hyelp hyelp" 158.05: "I see" should be preceded by a dash 162.12-13: "up" should be in line .12 (not .13) 183.25: "ladies" should be "ladies'" 224.04-05: "presence" should be in line .05 (not .04) 224.05-06: "fould the" should be in line .06 (not .05) 224.06-07: "gravy" should be in line .07 (not .06) 229.13-14: "Luncher Out." should be in line .14 (not .13) 229.14-15: "the Mer-" should be in line .15 (not .14) 229.15-16: "Misery." should be in line .16 (not .15) 248.32-33: "Blanche" should be in line .32 (not .33) 248.33-34: "Awabeg" should be in line .33 (not .34) 248.34-35: "cipher" should be in line .34 (not .35) 248.35-36: "na" should be in line .35 (not .36) 351.16: "allround" should be "all round" 390.17: "Deaddleconchs" should be "Deaddleconche" 427.22-23: "ousts of" should be in line .22 (not .23) 427.23-24: "the pity," should be in line .23 (not .24) 427.24-25: "for" should be in line .24 (not .25) 438.28: "thereinunder" should be "therinunder" (& wholly in line .28) 566.26: 2nd "porkego." should be "porkego!" 594.18-19: the "pub" of "clubpubber" should be in line .19 (not .18) 594.20-21: "of" should be in line .21 (not .20) 600.01-02: "to" should be in line .02 (not .01) 616.23: "oldfirm's" should be "old firm's" 346.08-.10: missing italics &c. 049.02: missing full stop before "His" 074.06-.07: the word "and" belongs to line .06, not .07 086.11: "Thoor-" should be "Thoors-" 082.22: "knobkerries," should be "knobkerries" 093.09: "the latten" should be "turn the latten" 094.22: "? ..........0!" should be a capital O, not a zero 095.12: in "H2CE3" there should be spaces before and after the "C 110.01: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 126.10: the question number should be "1" (one), not "I" (capital I) 159.09: the second "!" should not be italicised 140.13: "word:" should be "world:" 172.11: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 185.14: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 254.10: "lrenews" should be "Irenews" (uppercase I, not lowercase L) 310.09: there should be a comma after "somehows" 332.18: there should be a comma after "altolà" 332.18: there should be a comma after the first "gué" 332.18: there should be a full stop after ")" 342.34: "Loudnin" should be "Loundin" 352.10: "messgèr" should probably be "messger" (i.e. no accent on "e") (I believe the Faber & Viking editions just have a smudge there, but I may be wrong) 428.01: "Suasusopo!" should be "Suasusupo!" 428.02: "Somoanesia" should be "Samoanesia" 428.02: "be forgetting" should be "be after forgetting" 428.03: "chalking" should be "chalkin" 428.05: "in thoughts" should be "in your thoughts" 428.05: "how deepings" should be "how the deepings" 481.02: line should end with a "?", just like 481.03 481.03: "es" should be "as" 481.35: "fué fué" should be "fué! fué!" 508.27: there should be a comma after "shallshee" 547: the entire page, starting from line .06, is formatted as a "Penguin" page, not as a "Faber/Viking" one, whereas other pages follow the latter 576.01: there should be a comma after "scabie" 269.L: the Greek is altogether wrong (visible HTML, aberrant line break, missing alpha, missing diacritics (probably intentional)) 599.13: "even;" should be "even" 303.R: "AND WHISTLE." should occupy two lines, not one 262.20: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 264.01: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 265.F3: "H'd" should be "H' d" (i.e. space before "d") 266.20: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 266.L: "there's no no pug-" should be "there's no pug-" 269.F2: the accent on "Renee" should be eacute not egrave 277.F7: second line should not be indented 281.04: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 281.05: "plaîit" should be "plaît" 288.F5: "cinnamonhued" should be "cinnamondhued" 308.R: "BEEFTAY'S" should be "BEEEFTAY'S" 308.R: "POETICS" should be "POETIC" These may well be the last corrigenda for now. Good luck with updating your site. Finally, a favour. If someone sends you corrections in the future, I would be grateful if you could remember to forward them to me too, so that I can correct my copy as well. I will, of course, do the same if corrections arrive through my site. Ta, Raphael (http://www.fweet.org/)