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There are many pages that badly need cleaning up or reformatting. Perhaps we should collect them here, so that anyone who has a spare minute can fix one. Also a warning: dashes have been done with the markup <STRIKE> ; ; </STRIKE>, which shows up
Corrections suggested by Raphael of fweet.org 011.10-11: "in" should be in line .10 (not .11) 013.22: "Dyffinarsky" should be "Dyfflinarsky" 020.08-09: the "b" of "rubrickredd" should be in line .09 (not .08) 093.04: "patch" should be "pitch" 093.27: "Rasa" should be "Rosa" 093.36: "tribes, loss" should be "tribes loss" 122.34: "then)" should be "then);" 130.34-35: "polt" should be in line .34 (not .35) 130.35-36: the "high-" of "highbigpipey" should be in line .35 (not .36) 133.08-09: the "s" of "Liebsterpet" should be in line .08 (not .09) 136.36: "mountain" should be "moontaen" 138.36: "gird" should be "girds" 141.13: "hyelp hyelf" should be "hyelp hyelp" 158.05: "I see" should be preceded by a dash 162.12-13: "up" should be in line .12 (not .13) 183.25: "ladies" should be "ladies'" 224.04-05: "presence" should be in line .05 (not .04) 224.05-06: "fould the" should be in line .06 (not .05) 224.06-07: "gravy" should be in line .07 (not .06) 229.13-14: "Luncher Out." should be in line .14 (not .13) 229.14-15: "the Mer-" should be in line .15 (not .14) 229.15-16: "Misery." should be in line .16 (not .15) 248.32-33: "Blanche" should be in line .32 (not .33) 248.33-34: "Awabeg" should be in line .33 (not .34) 248.34-35: "cipher" should be in line .34 (not .35) 248.35-36: "na" should be in line .35 (not .36) 351.16: "allround" should be "all round" 390.17: "Deaddleconchs" should be "Deaddleconche" 427.22-23: "ousts of" should be in line .22 (not .23) 427.23-24: "the pity," should be in line .23 (not .24) 427.24-25: "for" should be in line .24 (not .25) 438.28: "thereinunder" should be "therinunder" (& wholly in line .28) 566.26: 2nd "porkego." should be "porkego!" 594.18-19: the "pub" of "clubpubber" should be in line .19 (not .18) 594.20-21: "of" should be in line .21 (not .20) 600.01-02: "to" should be in line .02 (not .01) <STRIKE>616.23: "oldfirm's" should be "old firm's"</STRIKE> (based mainly on Joyce's "Corrections of Misprints" list (and nearby lines)) Dr. Theall's original copy scanned to create the ASCII had Joyce's corrections as a separate pamphlet.
Gmail - Correction to Finnegans Web's Webified version of James Joyce's <i>Finnegans Wake</i> tim szeliga <[email protected]> 036.01: "ginger, which" should be "ginger which" 334.31: HTML visible 058.27: "(pardonnez!" should be "(pardonnez!)" 019.32: "waste, and" should be "waste and" 022.07: "'a forethought'" does not correspond to any of the texts I have (Faber, Viking & Penguin each have a different text here - I prefer Faber ("aforethought"), you seem to follow Viking in most of your text ("a forethought")) 059.32: "himself" should be followed by "." 365.12: "dollymaukins" should be followed by "!" (Faber) or by "." (Viking & Penguin) 132.36: there should be a "," after "eilerdich" 143.14: there is a spurious "." after "of" 310.27: there is a spurious "." after "in" 344.30: there is a spurious "." before "Clummensy" 375.30: there is a spurious "." before "fancy" 413.14: there should be a "." after "P.L.M" 420.20: "A.D." should be in a smaller font 552.16: there is a spurious "!" after "Welhell!" 022.31: there is a spurious "-" after "of" 271.L, last line: there should be a space between "crush" and "sake" 272.F1: there should a comma after "that" 290.26: "for'twas" should be "for 'twas" 295.33: "Lucihere !" should be "Lucihere.!" 307.F3: "Paris!" should be "Paris?" 011.10-11: "in" should be in line .10 (not .11) 013.22: "Dyffinarsky" should be "Dyfflinarsky" 020.08-09: the "b" of "rubrickredd" should be in line .09 (not .08) 093.04: "patch" should be "pitch" 093.27: "Rasa" should be "Rosa" 093.36: "tribes, loss" should be "tribes loss" 122.34: "then)" should be "then);" 130.34-35: "polt" should be in line .34 (not .35) 130.35-36: the "high-" of "highbigpipey" should be in line .35 (not .36) 133.08-09: the "s" of "Liebsterpet" should be in line .08 (not .09) 136.36: "mountain" should be "moontaen" 138.36: "gird" should be "girds" 141.13: "hyelp hyelf" should be "hyelp hyelp" 158.05: "I see" should be preceded by a dash 162.12-13: "up" should be in line .12 (not .13) 183.25: "ladies" should be "ladies'" 224.04-05: "presence" should be in line .05 (not .04) 224.05-06: "fould the" should be in line .06 (not .05) 224.06-07: "gravy" should be in line .07 (not .06) 229.13-14: "Luncher Out." should be in line .14 (not .13) 229.14-15: "the Mer-" should be in line .15 (not .14) 229.15-16: "Misery." should be in line .16 (not .15) 248.32-33: "Blanche" should be in line .32 (not .33) 248.33-34: "Awabeg" should be in line .33 (not .34) 248.34-35: "cipher" should be in line .34 (not .35) 248.35-36: "na" should be in line .35 (not .36) 351.16: "allround" should be "all round" 390.17: "Deaddleconchs" should be "Deaddleconche" 427.22-23: "ousts of" should be in line .22 (not .23) 427.23-24: "the pity," should be in line .23 (not .24) 427.24-25: "for" should be in line .24 (not .25) 438.28: "thereinunder" should be "therinunder" (& wholly in line .28) 566.26: 2nd "porkego." should be "porkego!" 594.18-19: the "pub" of "clubpubber" should be in line .19 (not .18) 594.20-21: "of" should be in line .21 (not .20) 600.01-02: "to" should be in line .02 (not .01) 616.23: "oldfirm's" should be "old firm's" 346.08-.10: missing italics &c. 049.02: missing full stop before "His" 074.06-.07: the word "and" belongs to line .06, not .07 086.11: "Thoor-" should be "Thoors-" 082.22: "knobkerries," should be "knobkerries" 093.09: "the latten" should be "turn the latten" 094.22: "? ..........0!" should be a capital O, not a zero 095.12: in "H2CE3" there should be spaces before and after the "C 110.01: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 126.10: the question number should be "1" (one), not "I" (capital I) 159.09: the second "!" should not be italicised 140.13: "word:" should be "world:" 172.11: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 185.14: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 254.10: "lrenews" should be "Irenews" (uppercase I, not lowercase L) 310.09: there should be a comma after "somehows" 332.18: there should be a comma after "altolà" 332.18: there should be a comma after the first "gué" 332.18: there should be a full stop after ")" 342.34: "Loudnin" should be "Loundin" 352.10: "messgèr" should probably be "messger" (i.e. no accent on "e") (I believe the Faber & Viking editions just have a smudge there, but I may be wrong) 428.01: "Suasusopo!" should be "Suasusupo!" 428.02: "Somoanesia" should be "Samoanesia" 428.02: "be forgetting" should be "be after forgetting" 428.03: "chalking" should be "chalkin" 428.05: "in thoughts" should be "in your thoughts" 428.05: "how deepings" should be "how the deepings" 481.02: line should end with a "?", just like 481.03 481.03: "es" should be "as" 481.35: "fué fué" should be "fué! fué!" 508.27: there should be a comma after "shallshee" 547: the entire page, starting from line .06, is formatted as a "Penguin" page, not as a "Faber/Viking" one, whereas other pages follow the latter 576.01: there should be a comma after "scabie" 269.L: the Greek is altogether wrong (visible HTML, aberrant line break, missing alpha, missing diacritics (probably intentional)) 599.13: "even;" should be "even" 303.R: "AND WHISTLE." should occupy two lines, not one 262.20: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 264.01: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 265.F3: "H'd" should be "H' d" (i.e. space before "d") 266.20: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 266.L: "there's no no pug-" should be "there's no pug-" 269.F2: the accent on "Renee" should be eacute not egrave 277.F7: second line should not be indented 281.04: line should be indented as it is a start of a paragraph 281.05: "plaîit" should be "plaît" 288.F5: "cinnamonhued" should be "cinnamondhued" 308.R: "BEEFTAY'S" should be "BEEEFTAY'S" 308.R: "POETICS" should be "POETIC" These may well be the last corrigenda for now. Good luck with updating your site. Finally, a favour. If someone sends you corrections in the future, I would be grateful if you could remember to forward them to me too, so that I can correct my copy as well. I will, of course, do the same if corrections arrive through my site. Ta, Raphael (http://www.fweet.org/)